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 2017 Writers-Editors Network International Writing Competition - WINNERS
(HM = Honorable Mention)

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POETRY
1st Place - Jody Karr, Oklahoma City, OK – "Lying in Bed in Oklahoma" – This free verse poem captures attention and jolts readers into a beautifully expressed visualization of the horror of war and its aftermath.

2nd Place - Sally Clark, Fredericksburg, TX –"Los Compadres" – The irony and levity of a restaurant crew piling out of their work place into someone else's restaurant where one can find "laughter shaking the air like maracas" is the fresh stuff of which a well-written poem can bring readers into the experience.

3rd Place - Catherine Moran, Little Rock, AR – Reaching through the paint" – The descriptive encounter of an interesting subject draws readers into a prehistoric world of darkness, light, beauty, and respect for life.

1st HM - Susan Lindsley, Decatur, GA – "The Unwritten Poem" – With brevity and humor, this poem illustrates a moment of distraction, which most people can identify with in some way.

2nd HM - Joan Weiner, Asheville, NC – "Afterwards" – Emotional impact carries readers through this free verse poem and into a revelation most people will eventually experience too.

3rd HM - Nick Sweet, Shepherd, TX – "Decent/Descent" – The story of this poem unfolds with rhyme, rhythm, and reality with which readers can relate.

4th HM - Louise Eastin Moses, Indian Rocks Beach, FL – "My Cousin Carrie" – This story poem offers emotional appeal readers can relate to and envision.

5th HM - L. L. Larkins, Littleton, CO – "Psalm~Carol 27" – With slant rhyme, true rhyme, and sound echoes, this poem retells a psalm.

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Cassandra Tiersma, Dunsmuir, CA – "Spill" – Humor and reader identification make this lively poem most promising with a little tweak.

NONFICTION
1st Place - Myrna Gordon Skurnick, Boca Raton, FL – "To Be or Not To Be Seen" – Good story. Well-written with descriptions that take the reader to the time and place.

2nd Place -  Ingrid Silvian, Groveport, OH – "Growing up during Hitler's WWII" – Simply, but skillfully written. Could use editing, especially with repetitive "they" and "she." But overall, very well done. The reader feels transported to the precarious war years. Good job.

3rd Place - Myrna Gordon Skurnick, Boca Raton, FL – "The Sιance" – With the same characters as the top entry, this story, too, is well-written. The reader feels like she is in the story, rather than standing outside looking in.

Honorable Mention - Valerie Gardener, Cornville, AZ – "The Golf Tournament" – Excellent premise, which is part of the writer's memoir. Needs tweaking/editing with smoother flow and transitions. Overall, good writing.

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Alessandra Bianchi, Marblehead, MA – "A Room of One's Own: With Yahtzee, Frozen Pop Up and the Red Sox"– Outstanding story idea. Needs a bit of help with editing, point-of-view and format.

FICTION
1st Place - Cindy Pontrelli, Green Cove Springs, FL – "Flight 1715 to Havana," Chapter 6 – Author knows how to throw a punch. Excellent and descriptive word usage. Puts reader rightfully on edge with drama that is well done, not overdone. If the other chapters are as good as this chapter submission, then the novel is ripe for publishing.

2nd Place - Linda Newman, San Mateo, CA –"Collision, short story – This well-crafted short story earned the Most Promising last year. Very good storyline with surprise ending. Great reworking and great job.

3rd Place - Alexander Fernandez, Roseville, CA – "Above the Ashes," Chapter One – Well-written with the potential of an outstanding novel to come. Needs some editing, but author is on the right track with solid characters and structure, and just-right dialogue, which carry the plot forward very well.

Honorable Mention - Kate Ruland-Thorne, Grand Junction, CO – "Beneath the Endless Sky," Chapter One – Writer is off to a good start with the first chapter. Could use the help of a good editor to tighten and pare down the adjectives (e.g. either emerald or green but not emerald green). This book could easily be on the path toward being published.

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Patricia Grady Cox, Phoenix, AZ – "Next Year," short story – The writer shows great promise. Structure needs tweaking but good story, characters and verbiage.

CHILDREN'S LITERATURE
1st Place - Gail Hedrick, Bradenton, FL – "What's for Dinner?" – Appropriate for its intended 8-12-year-old readership, this lively story poem offers humor and a fresh view told in rhythmic couplets.

2nd Place - Joyce Lapin, Simsbury, CT – "The Ladder to the Moon" – This picture book has humor and keeps young readers interested.

3rd Place - Belva Green, Tarpon Springs, FL – "Clickity City"– Preschoolers will enjoy the sounds and sights of city life as portrayed in this picture book poem.

1st HM - Ida J. Lewenstein, San Mateo, CA –  "A Sad Little Dog" –  The title doesn't give readers a hint about the story, but this picture book poem can help young readers to see they're exactly who they need to be.

2nd HM - Georgia Kelly Fitzhugh, Lancaster, TX – "A Valentine Surprise" – Although the title gives no hint of the subject matter, this nonfiction for grade school readers includes well-done research on the Chisholm Trail with "Notes to Parents and Teachers" that could be reworded as a nonfiction article to interest kids.

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Claire Hernandez, Lafayette, LA – "The Selfish Rainbow" (story) – This story for readers 5 to 8-years-old may actually be two stories in one!
 

 

 2016 Writers-Editors Network International Writing Competition - WINNERS
(HM = Honorable Mention)

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POETRY
1st Place - Morgan Baylog Finn, New Hartford, CT – "To Mother, Age 76, As She Considers Sky-Diving – Delightful and insightful, this free verse provides a story in moving pictures that uplift.

2nd Place - Sally Clark, Fredericksburg, TX – "Crop Rotation" – With fresh phrasing and strong visuals, this free verse poem will speak to most readers – and all of us who have had to adapt to changing lifestyles.

3rd Place - Olivia Norem, Tampa, FL – "Televised Side Effects" – Readers will not only identify with this humorous social commentary, they've most likely lived it.

1st HM - Louise Moses, Indian Rocks Beach, FL – "Chocolate Tastes Better in Paris" – Humor, sensual phrasing, and imagery pour into this delectable free verse.

2nd HM - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "The Old Depot" – True to form, this sonnet evokes emotion and a clear scene from the past before ending on a strong note.

3rd HM - Catherine Moran, Little Rock, AR – "Stranded" – The sign in this Shakespearian sonnet depicts a poignant sign of our times.

4th HM - Sally Clark, Fredericksburg, TX – "Barking and Clawing Against a Sensible Leash" – This story in free verse has a conversational tone, situations people can identify with, and insightful phrasing.

5th HM - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "Music of the Pipes" – As the title indicates, this sonnet has musicality and also visual appeal.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Jan Evans, Toccoa, GA – "Messiah"
Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "Ghostly Ship"

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Sally Clark, Fredericksburg, TX – "How to Make it Rain" – This free verse has strong reader identification and humor to deal with a common frustration.

NONFICTION
1st Place - Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "Let's Give Djokovic Some Love" (article) – There's a good reason why this writer has been singled out before (the judge recognizes the style from previous years). His (or her) stories are well written and creative with excellent active verbs and adjectives. The stories flow well, and each transition is smoothly done. Strong lead sentences/paragraph draw the reader into the story. Good job.

2nd Place - Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – ""Surprises, Demises, and Reprises at the US Open" (article) – See #1 comments.

3rd Place - Scott Hubbartt, Schertz, TX – "The Mail Run" (article) – Overall, this was a good story and with a needed edit and rewrite, it could be a very good story.

HM - Alessandra Bianchi, Marblehead, MA – "Creature Comforts: To Please Spouse, Be Catty" (article) – While needing editing, a rewrite and re-formatting, the submission was cleverly written. The writer shows promise.

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Joyce Lapin, Simsbury, CT – "If You Could Ride on an Asteroid..." (children's picture book)  This children's nonfiction book displays a good premise but is in need of being more concise and edited. More to come in a short critique.

FICTION
1st Place - Carol MacAllister, Boqueron, PR – "Wind at My Back," Chapter One (novel) – This novel shows promise for publication, judging by the outstanding delivery of chapter one. Characters are well formed. Their dialogue is crisp, relevant and to the point, carrying the plot forward with ease and sensibility. The author has given careful thought to plotting, structure, clarity and word choices. The reader is eager to read more. Good job!

2nd Place - Randi Lynn Mrvos, Lexington, KY – "Rosie and the Absolutely, Positively Extraordinary Day (children's picture book story) – What a clever, fun and well-written children's picture book story. It's easy to visualize what illustrations could accompany this imaginative story, which could easily make publication.

3rd Place - Jan Evans, Toccoa, GA – "The No-No's Say Yes" (children's story) – It was a tough choice between #2 and #3, as "The No-No's Say Yes" is also cleverly written. This will make a fun children's book, while it also has a creative way to send a subtle and positive message to kids. Worthy of being published.

1st HM - Jeff Boyle, Ormond Beach, FL – "Twenty-Two" (short story) – Needing some fine tuning, this is a powerful and well-written short story. Projects a punch.

2nd HM - Jan Evans, Toccoa, GA – "One Last Time" (short story) – This short story shows promise, especially with a bit of editing. For example, the writer uses the word Abraham too frequently when the word "he" would suffice.

MOST PROMISING (will receive a critique)
Linda Newman, San Mateo, CA – "Coma" (mystery short story) – The storyline and characters are well done. The manuscript needs some tweaking. The judge will elaborate in a short critique.

 

2015 Writers-Editors Network International Writing Competition - WINNERS
(HM = Honorable Mention)

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CHILDREN'S LITERATURE
1st Place - June Estep Fiorelli, Sarasota, FL – "Celebrating the Fourth," poem – In five quatrains, this poem gives an overview of American history appropriate for the age group with the use of effectively chosen rhymes to enhance reader interest.

2nd Place - Ingrid Silvian, Groveport, OH – "The Piano Tuner's Daughter," short story for 8- to 12-year-olds – The ordinariness of children at play gives readers a sense of being there as this memorable story unfolds in its World War II setting.

3rd Place - Barbara Beard, Pickering, Ontario – "Too Much Trouble," picture book for 4- to 8-year-old readers – Young children will identify with this lively story which has humor and an effective use of repetition.

1st HM - Julie Pavelich, North Royalton, OH – "Joy at the Fair," short story, K–grade 4 – This age-appropriate story centers on a common problem of overcoming fears then closes with a delightful, surprise ending.

2nd HM - June Estep Fiorelli, Sarasota, FL – "Dear Santa, All I Want…," poem, ages 4–8 – Humor, reader identification, and bouncy rhymes make this story poem stand out.

3rd HM - Juliana M. Jones, Daniels, WV – "The Final Segment," novel chapter, ages 8–12 – This well-written, age-appropriate story has credibility even though set in the future.

4th HM - Belva Green, Tarpon Springs, FL and Holmen, WI – "The Coat," short story – A fresh premise adds a new perspective to an old story children will want to revisit.

5th HM - Karen B. Kurtz, Fairhope, AL – "Sophia's Gift," picture book, ages 4–8 – Set in the Civil War, this story has very strong possibilities as a chapter book for children 8 to 10.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Theresa Gage, Auburn, WA – "Hooked," short story, 10-year-old readers

Randi Lynn Mrvos, Lexington, KY – "Totally, Completely, Perfectly Me," short story, ages 4–6

POETRY
1st Place - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "The Lonely Beach," Shakespearean sonnet – The use of a traditional form kept a true-to-life story from sentimentality, yet its very conciseness enhanced its emotional impact. Besides staying true to form, the story is one with which most readers will readily identify.

2nd Place - Connie Golden, Duanesburg, NY – "Dolphin Beach after Sandy," free verse – These free verse lines revisit another beach, taking us there visually and showing us the resilience of people and nature.

3rd Place - Bruce L. Reynolds, Potomac, MD – "Reluctance," free verse – An interesting metaphor turns into a fresh analogy then ends on an unexpected note of humor in these tightly written lines.

1st HM - George Rhoades, Duncan, OK – "Don't Cry, Juanita," free verse – This interesting story has the visual and emotional appeal needed to draw readers.

2nd HM - Dorothy K. Fletcher, Jacksonville, FL – "Blessing the Cats," free verse - These lines paint a familiar scene from a fresh perspective, showing the effect our actions can have.

3rd HM - Carol Ann Castagna, North Port, FL – "Listen to the Quiet," free verse - Even the loveliest of scenes hints of tranquility, hard-won but waiting to be found.

4th HM - Patricia Callan, Newton, MA – "Razed: a Rondel," rondel - Making effective use of the repetition inherent in this traditional form, the poem tightly compresses a social concern into a fixed pattern that beautifully contains and confines what might otherwise be a rant!

5th HM - Nancy Burke, Evanston, IL – "Icons," free verse - An outstanding metaphor elevated this poem into an interesting story with strong reader identification.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Connie Golden, Duanesburg, NY – "View from the Train after Twenty Years," traditional quatrains

Leslie P. Groves, McPherson, KS – "When On That Wintry Morning," traditional quatrains

Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "The Ghost of Martha Linn," villanelle

Lisa L. Walker, Holland, MI – "Ordinary Holy," free verse

UNPUBLISHED NONFICTION ARTICLE/ESSAY/BOOK CHAPTER
1st Place - Lily Beck, Asheville, NC – "Run With Me" – These sparse poetic lines evoke emotional impact with strong reader identification for anyone who has witnessed change.

2nd Place - Nancy Summersong, Frenchville, ME – "The Voices Of My Ancestors" – The changes addressed in this personal experience piece draw readers to a more natural lifestyle as the author's Native American family once experienced.

3rd Place - Laurie Glieco, Buffalo, NY – "Grandma's Groceries" – Again, changes take the reader from candle stubs to circuit breakers as the personal experience narrative recalls a simpler time.

1st HM - Alice Grant Bingner, Ann Arbor, MI – "Is Prehistoric Site in Peril?" – This essay focuses on the potential changes to an ancient landscape if the area opens wide to tourism.

2nd HM - Cindy Pontrelli, Green Cove Springs, FL – "Take A Dive Into History" – A scuba diving trip in the Pacific transports the author back in time to recount WWII events in the area.

3rd HM - Jane Lael, Chapel Hill, NC – "Psychic Surgeon" – This personal experience piece tells the interesting story of an unusual surgical encounter.

4th HM - Patricia Crandall, Petersburgh, NY – "A Witch-Link to Salem, Massachusetts" – Research enhanced, well-written account of the Pagan/Wiccan influences continuing in Salem today.

5th HM - Myrna Gordon Skurnick, Boca Raton, FL – "September 3, 1939" – In this essay, historical events affect the author and help readers to envision a crucial time in WWII.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Laurie Glieco, Buffalo, NY – "Permanent Quarters" (personal experience)

Bethanie Baker Henderson, Hatfield, PA – "Crawling through Parenthood" (personal experience)

Diann MacRae, Bothell, WA – "Chronicles Of The Jet Set" (essay on crows)

NOVEL CHAPTER - UNPUBLISHED
1st Place - Jeff Boyle, Ormond Beach, FL – Nam World, Chapter 1, "Nine Eleven" – Depth of characters, story action, and insightful narration mark the beginnings of this important novel.

2nd Place - Nancy Burke, Evanston, IL – Undergrowth, Chapter LVII – Gorgeous description based on keen observation make this work outstanding.

3rd Place - Heather Hamel, Elkton, FL – Western Promise, Chapter 1 – The historical setting, interesting characters, and touch of humor immediately draw readers into the story.

1st HM - Anne Nichols Reynolds, Lake Placid, FL – A Will of Her Own, Chapter One – The very first pages nicely set up the story people, setting, and unfolding plot.

2nd HM - Liz Marshall, Phoenix, AZ – Seeing Eye – A day at the fair, Chapter One, Nine of Swords, "The Vision" – The action and characters entice readers into this fresh story.

3rd HM - Jeff Boyle, Ormond Beach, FL – Nam World, Chapter 10, "VA Counseling" – The interesting situation in this well-written chapter stands on its own but enriches the whole book.

4th HM - Nancy Burke, Evanston, IL – Undergrowth, Chapter XIII – Credible characters, insights, and visual appeal enhance the story.

5th HM - Lucinda Waldron, Bell, FL – Mosquito County, Chapter 1 – The opening pages reveal the historical setting, introduce interesting characters, and hint at the plot to come.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Courtney Allen, Decatur, GA – Down From the Mountain, Prologue, Part One

Courtney Allen, Decatur, GA– Down From the Mountain, Chapter Five

Jeff Boyle, Ormond Beach, FL – Nam World, Chapter 34, "Bad Blood"

Carol MacAllister, Boqueron, PR– Evening Star, Chapter 30

Sandra Matuschka, Tiverton, RI – Anne, Chapter One

Carol J. Perry, Madeira Beach, FL – Hurricane Season, Chapter One

Anne Nichols Reynolds, Lake Placid, FL – Winter Harvest, Chapter One

Kate Ruland-Thorne, Grand Junction, CO – I Married Adventure: A Novel Based on the Memoir of a Palestinian Jew, "Two – Kilindini Harbor, Mombassa, Kenya, 1941"

SHORT STORY - UNPUBLISHED
1st Place - Jeff Boyle, Ormond Beach, FL – "Miss Piano" – The fresh plot, credible characters, and interesting setting gave a tightly written performance in this short story.

2nd  Place - Sallie Barr Palmer, Largo, FL – "The Cloak of Invisibility" – The dark humor in this well-written story had something important to say.

3rd  Place - Alicia Stankay, Ambridge, PA – "Blueberry Muffins" – Light humor in this story shows reality outdoing dreams.

1st  HM - Jan Evans, Toccoa, GA – "Come to the River," a parable – The opening page immediately draws readers into a story that has the feel of an ancient folktale.

2nd HM - Geraldine Bass, Olathe, KS – "Murder" – The unexpected humor and plot twist lighten the macabre into an amusing read.

3rd HM - K. A. McLaughlin, La Mesa, CA – "The Latch," a fantasy – This credible tale takes an inventive turn into another world.

4th HM - Alice Grant Bingner, Ann Arbor, MI – "In This Case, Wrong Is Right" – Clearing a misunderstanding creates an interesting story and just right end.

5th HM - Belva Green, Tarpon Springs, FL and Holmen, WI – "The Incident of the Naughty Noodles" – Creative way to rave: write a humorous story!

NOTABLE
Sandy K. Jordan
, Neosho, MO – "The Mother's Legacy"

PREVIOUSLY PUBLISHED NONFICTION ARTICLE/ESSAY/BOOK CHAPTER
1st Place - Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "Beauty of Federer" – This tightly written article serves up an enticing view of tennis in general and Roger Federer in particular.

2nd Place - Linda Zajac, Vernon, CT – "Guardians of the Forest" – Science and technology come together with good fiction techniques as a drone surveys a tropical forest, looking for nests of orangutans.

3rd Place - Dorothy Pedersen, Orangeville, Ontario – "Three Diamond Sparrow" – Fright glides into flight on a well-written, personal experience piece.

1st HM - Alice Grant Bingner, Ann Arbor, MI – "Legally Blind Nun Leads Fated Invasion" – Who wouldn't love the true story of an 82-year-old nun still aiming to change the world!

2nd HM - Karen B. Kurtz, Fairhope, AL – "Comfort and Sanctuary: Dolls Along the Underground Railroad" – Well-researched facts enlighten readers about a dark period in history.

3rd HM - Linda Zajac, Vernon, CT – "Searching for Monkeys: A scientist journeys into the world of the golden lion tamarin" – An endangered species and an exotic setting generate interest in this nonfiction article.

4th HM - Anne Nichols Reynolds, Lake Placid, FL – "Surviving Hezekiah's Tunnel" – This modern-day personal experience takes readers through a rocky, unlit passage into biblical times.

5th HM - Jean Powis, Troy, NY – "She Dared to be Different" – From women's suffrage to undercover work in a rat-infested factory and a mental institution, the adventuresome story of Elizabeth Cochran aka Nellie Bly transports readers around the world of her times.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Alessandra Bianchi, Marblehead, MA – "Into the Backcountry...and Back" (skiing adventure)

Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "Why the Strike Zone Is So Important in Tennis"

Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "In a Spin" (tennis strokes and strategies)

Roberta Sandler, Lake Worth, FL – "First in Flight: Where Babe hit his first home run" (Fayetteville, NC)

 

2014 Writers-Editors Network International Writing Competition - WINNERS
(HM = Honorable Mention)

CHILDREN'S LITERATURE
1st Place - Susan T. Davis, Poughkeepsie, NY – Quest for Freedom: The Story of Ebenezer Fletcher, book chapter, 7- to 12-year-olds – The first page quickly sketches the main character and situation, immediately drawing readers into the action of this tightly written story.

2nd Place - A. Gwynn Henderson, Lexington, KY – "Bone-y Secrets," nonfiction article, 9- to 12-year-olds – Everybody has bones! This universal appeal makes the subject interesting but especially to a bone-growing age group who will be drawn into reading by the friendly tone and get-to-the-point style.

3rd Place - Barbara Layman, Van Nuys, CA – "Day Dreamer and the Sleeping Giants," short story, 7- to 9-year-olds – Beginning with the action, this engaging story heightens reader-interest through its strong characters, natural setting and such poetic phrases as "when the moon dragged the shadows from the trees."

1st HM - Linda Zajac, Vernon, CT – "Monkey's Whispered Warning," nonfiction article, 9- to 14-year-olds – As the bibliography shows, this interesting article has been well-researched and well-written in a well-chosen form as a nonfiction article, rather than a picture book.

2nd HM - Carol MacAllister, Boqueron, PR – "Floating Piρatas," short story, 6- to 9-year-olds – The humor, easy-to-picture scenes, and interesting setting make this story fun to read.

3rd HM - Jane B. Rawlings, Bernardsville, NJ – "The Stable Guests," short story, 8- to 12-year-olds – Finding a new view of an old story can be difficult, but this plausible story within the Nativity scene helps readers to see themselves in the story too.

4th HM - Nancy Summersong Dellagrotta, Frenchville, ME – "Jesus Says," poem, 6- to 9-year-olds – These rhythmic, rhyming verses show hard-to-explain concepts in a way children can understand and relate.

5th HM - Lorna Foreman, Cornwall, ON – "Catie Caterpillar," short story, 4- to 6-year-olds – This story of a caterpillar's metamorphosis comes from the perspective of the wooly caterpillar herself, increasing a younger child's awareness of bugs and insects in a positive way.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Sally Bair, Washburn, WI – "Galoshes for Grandma," short story, 6- to 9-year-olds – Based on a true incident, the story moves through bad weather, danger, and disappointment into a credible ending.

Sally Bair, Washburn, WI – Williwaw Winds, chapter 6, novel, age 8 and up – A howling storm gets this chapter of an adventuresome tale off to a lively start.

Connie Espinoza, Somerset, TX – "Threads of Kindness," short story, middle grades - This easy-to-picture story interweaves Spanish words with their meanings made apparent by the setting and context.

Linda Zajac, Vernon, CT – The Black Gumdrop: A Book about Carbon, nonfiction picture book, 6- to 8-year-olds – If it were a nonfiction article, this might easily place with a magazine or textbook publisher looking for well-written manuscripts with a thorough bibliography.

Linda, Zajac, Vernon, CT – "The Two-Spotted Troublemaker," nonfiction article, 9- to 12-year-olds – The first page introduces the aquarium life of a two-spotted octopus – a kid-appealing subject made even more interesting by the sidebars and bibliography.


 POETRY
1st Place - Kate Eldredge, State College, PA – "Boomerang" – free verse – This 6-part poem pulls in readers with startling statements and fresh ways of expressing insights that eventually erupt from a fractured relationship.

2nd Place - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "Harbor Watch" – sonnet – From the first line, a reader can enter the experience and see the story unfold.

3rd Place - Katherine J. Leisering, Parkersburg,WV – "Verses Scribbl'd in My Burning House," parody in couplets – Amusing anachronisms arise from the ashes of the burnt words and house of Anne Bradstreet, the first female writer and first English-speaking poet in the Early American colonies, who could have saved both minutes and money with either Geico or Allstate.

1st HM - Connie Golden, Duanesburg, NY – "Closing the Porch" – free verse –  Poets often express the loss of a loved one, but these lines do this without ever saying so.

2nd HM - Carol T. Castagna, North Port, FL – "Night in Spring" – praise poem – Poets often express thanks to God, but this poem does so beautifully with "the moon wanting only to remain in this moment."

3rd HM - Jan Evans, Toccoa, GA – "Pentecost" – nonet – These nine lines begin with nine syllables descending into one, bringing readers into the experience and showing how a set form that allows only a few words can often be highly appealing.

4th HM - Connie Golden, Duanesburg, NY– "The Basement" – free verse – A personal experience becomes universal in this poem of dealing with loss.

5th HM - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "Phantom Footprints" – villanelle –  With effective use of the repetition required for this verse form, the well-written story draws readers into a life that didn't go as planned.

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Robert Clay Calhoun, El Dorado, KS – "Visitation" – sonnet with varying meter – Traditional verse addresses the traditional story of Mary visiting Elizabeth in a nontraditional way.

David Dillon, West Glover, VT – "Recycling Day" – free verse – Even the format of this poem emphasizes the contrast between cultural expectations and hard-won independence.

Barbara K. Lunow, Fort Mill, SC – "Quite Contrary" – free verse – Long and short lines separate regrets, aspirations, and a freshly stated "promise just beyond/ the corrugated."


PREVIOUSLY PUBLISHED NONFICTION ARTICLE/ESSAY/BOOK CHAPTER
1st Place - Barbara Layman, Van Nuys, CA – "Among Myth, Magic & Mortals" – You can almost feel the pixie dust gently floating down in this descriptive, well-written piece about the makings of Walt Disney's fairies' characters. The story flows beautifully with excellent and creative word choices.

2nd Place - Nancy Crochiere, Amesbury, MA – "I'll Never Lube This Way Again" – The author of this cleverly written story knows exactly when and how to pace her humor. The article flows very well, the dialogue is in just the right place, and the humor never comes close to being corny, as it makes perfect sense. This judge believes that both No. 1 and No. 2 are ripe for reprinting the stories elsewhere.

3rd Place - Catherine Rain, Rockledge, FL – "Still Life" – The author conveys an emotional depth in her riveting story about daughter/father love and remembrance. Kudos for putting the reader in the story.

1st HM - Dawn A. Baldwin, Bartow, WV – "Re-Visiting Self-Reliance" – The essay about the author's "kinship" to Ralph Waldo Emerson is ingenious, intelligent, original and skillfully written. Bravo.

2nd HM - Barbara Layman, Van Nuys, CA – "Voicing Memories" – This is the same author as No. 1, and he/she is spot on with ease of topic, dialogue and explanation. Very interesting and well-written piece.

3rd HM - Daniel James Waters, Clear Lake, IA – "November 22nd (Remembered)"

4th HM - Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "A Tale of Two Swiss"

5th HM - Jean Powis, Troy, NY – "Editors: Friends or Foes"

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Sally Bair, Washburn, WI – "My Girl Jennie: A Love Story"

Jan Sherbin, Cincinnati, OH – "The Olympics: An Opportunity for Cultures to Get Cozy"


UNPUBLISHED NONFICTION ARTICLE/ESSAY/BOOK CHAPTER
1ST Place - Janine MJ Desvaux, Alexandria, VA – "The Making of Sugar" – A beautifully written and exceptionally descriptive short story that makes the reader wish it were a longer story. Excellent. Except for "wanting more," the judge would not change anything in this nonfiction work.

2nd Place - Denise Harlow Timpko, Broadlands, VA – "Choices" – Although the present tense works, the judge believes past tense would flow a smidge better. That said, however, the story seems true to itself with excellent word choices and descriptions-"The blue-gray stare lacks humanity…" The author takes the reader through her traumatic journey of domestic abuse to a life of clarity and good choices. Well done.

3rd Place - Cara Sue Achterberg, New Freedom, PA – "Cowboy Mom" – The author weaves a great story about her love affair with horses, through a period of disenchantment until she reaches her destiny with the need for a particular horse. Her narrative and pacing are outstanding.

1st HM - Linda Bragg, New Port Richey, FL – "Blindside" – The author of this essay takes the reader through the challenges she faces with death and the string of losses she endures. Well written.

2nd HM - Laurie Glieco, Buffalo, NY – "Patterns"

3rd HM - Emily Hutto, Denver, CO – "Shooting Through Barriers"

4th HM - Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "Big Sister Na Chops Up Little Onion"

5th HM - Elizabeth A. Churchill, Scottsdale, AZ – "My Daughter, My Son – The Night Our World Stood Still"

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Sally Bair, Washburn, WI – "High Tea"

Geraldine Nicholas, Sherwood Park, Alberta – "Terry's Dream"

SHORT STORY - UNPUBLISHED
1st Place - Bruce J. Graham, Winter Park, FL – "Cross and Double Cross" – An interesting and original story idea. Dialogue and pacing are good.

2nd  Place - Alicia Stankay, Ambridge, PA – "Golden Days" – Good story, which could be helped with good editing.

3rd  Place - Daniel J. Waters, Clear Lake, IA – "Decathexis"

1st  HM - J. E. (Buck) Buchanan, Boynton Beachm, FL – "Regrets, No Regrets"
2nd HM - Ben A. Sharpton, Washaw, NC – "Something in the Air"


NOVEL CHAPTER - UNPUBLISHED
1st Place - Kate Ruland-Thorne, Grand Junction, CO – The Ancestors: Book One – The author succeeds from the beginning, as the reader feels the foul seawater, the seaweed that slaps the face, the frigid current and the fish that nibble the earlobes. To paraphrase Jerry Maguire's "you had me at hello," the author "has" the reader from word one, which continues throughout the chapter with excellent word choices, dialogue, plot and pacing.

2nd Place - Colleen Garrett, Ormond Beach, FL – Josephine's Garden: Epilogue – Grandpa's Coin – The reader easily envisions what Eudell looked like-both past and present-because of the author's vivid descriptions. The dialogue is concise and appropriate to the epilogue.

3rd Place - Colleen Garrett, Ormond Beach, FL – Josephine's Garden: Chapter 8 – The Gardener – Although the dialect could be perceived as off-putting at times, the dialogue, plot, and pacing are outstanding. The author is a good storyteller, and this novel shows promise.

1st HM - Joseph T. Straub, Orlando, FL – The Journeyman: Prologue – While other chapters in this book might need tightening and editing, the prologue is deftly written with well-chosen adjectives and verbs. The story transitions well from one paragraph to another

2nd HM - David Waid, Phoenix, AZ – Bone Conjurer, Chapter 24: The Valley of Winds – This novel holds promise. The narrative and pace flow with ease.

3rd HM - John J. White, Merritt Island, FL – Brooklyn Nights: Chapter 1

4th HM - Deborah Ann Whitford, Phoenix, AZ – Vanilla Popsicles: Chapter 27 – Tradition

5th HM - Barbara Florio Graham, Gatineau, Quebec – Exits: Star

NOTABLES (alphabetical by author)
Cindy Pontrelli, Green Cove Springs, FL – Flight 1715 to Havana: Chapter 5

Deborah Ann Whitford, Phoenix, AZ – Vanilla Popsicles: Chapter 8 – Mart Beag

 

2013 Writers-Editors Network Annual International Writing Competition - WINNERS
(HM = Honorable Mention)

SHORT STORY - UNPUBLISHED
1st Place – Irene Uttendorfsky, Port Leyden, NY – "The Portrait" – A strong, well-formed lead paragraph with just-right descriptive words begins the story's well-conceived journey that continues to the "surprise" ending. Pacing is very good, as is the dialogue. Just like the next story (2nd Place), this short story could easily segue into a novel.

2nd Place – Patricia A. Cox, Phoenix, AZ – "The Long Walk" – The author paints a lovely and sensitive picture with beautifully descriptive words. The chosen verbiage is not "over done," but rather right on target and pitch perfect for this particular genre story. Short paragraphs and dialogue briefs are very effective. This judge could easily see the short story evolving into a novel.

3rd Place – Rick Gustafson, Parker, CO – "Discipline" – The author explores the senses of his/her reader who can almost smell, taste, see and feel whatever is taking place throughout the story. Good plotting and characterization cause the reader to keep turning the pages.

1st HM – Melanie Peterson, Jackson Heights, NY – "November in Dallas"

2nd HM – Miriam Goodspeed, Palm Harbor, FL – "The Coming"

3rd HM – Jan Sherbin, Cincinnati, OH – "Under Fire: The Kiss"

4th HM – Arthur M. Doweyko, Vero Beach, FL – "Little Snowy Mountains"


NOVEL CHAPTER - UNPUBLISHED
1st Place - Carol J. Perry, Madeira Beach, FL – "Nightshades" – Sometimes a first person novel does not work, but in this case, the first person viewpoint is used very well and successfully. The character grabs hold of the reader with her actions, dialogue and thought process. Good use of carefully chosen dialogue easily carries the reader through the first chapter, anticipating what could follow. (Note: Carol Perry received a multi-title deal for this book - see our interview with Carol at http://WritersEditorsNetwork.com/winning-contest-helps-author-land-multi-boo k-contract/

2nd Place – Cindy Pontrelli, Green Cove Springs, FL – "Flight 1715 to Havana" – The first chapter is short, but more than effective because of its beautifully crafted words that put the reader right in the middle of the scene. The reader not only looks forward to the next chapter but to the entire book.

3rd Place – Patricia A. Cox, Phoenix, AZ – "Hellgate" – The short lead paragraph effectively sets the stage for this novel, putting "a lot" into two descriptive sentences – a young woman's pain, tension and the unknown during the days of the Wild West. The good pacing, narrative and dialogue make the reader want more.

1st HM – Colleen Garrett, Ormond Beach, FL – "Chapter 7 – Photographs and Memories"

2nd HM – Robert E. Marvin, Bradenton, FL – "Falling for Isaac Newton"

3rd HM – James D. Cary, Boynton Beach, FL – "Marco Polo Travels"

4th HM – Alexander Fernandez, Santa Maria, CA – "Tears for a World"

5th HM – G. Gray McVicker, West Des Moines, IA – "Close the Gates of Mercy"


CHILDREN'S LITERATURE
1st Place – Melissa Killian, Cheswick, PA – "The Metamorphosis of a Marshmallow," short story for teens – Has likeable characters, a conversational tone, fresh twist, and credible but clever resolution.

2nd Place – Carol MacAllister, Boqueron, PR – "Kiko's Pineapple Pie," short story for 5-7-year-olds – Moves at a lively pace in a colorful setting with a nicely subtle theme on patience.

3rd Place – Carolyn Madero, Stamford, CT – "Would You Like to Hear My Poem?" poem for 4-8-year-olds – Keeps an appropriately rhythmic beat while presenting a story most children will identify with and enjoy.

1st HM – Linda Zajac, Vernon, CT – "Tuxedo Penguins in Peril," nonfiction book chapter – Includes a thorough bibliography with sidebars and a topic that appeals to most children.

2nd HM – Susan T. Davis, Poughkeepsie, NY – "Baseball Laughs and the Men Who Made Them," nonfiction article – Puts good research and writing into play.

3rd HM – Carol Bennett, West Warwick, RI – "Deborah: An Easter Story," book chapter – Uses a credible situation to create a fresh treatment of a familiar Bible story.

4th HM – Darlene Buechel, Chilton, WI – "Six Rules for Surviving a Stepdad," short story – Has a conversational tone that makes readers feel as though they're in the story, too.

5th HM – Carol MacAllister, Boqueron, PR – "Too Many Hats," short story – Maintains a lively pace and good humor in this well-written story.

6th HM – Linda Zajec, Vernon, CT – "Ice King of the Mountain," nonfiction book chapter – Has obviously been well-researched and tightly written.

7th HM – Janine Yordy, Huntersville, NC – "Skating on Thin Ice," first chapter of novel in free verse – Hints at the whole story, which sounds like a "good read."


PREVIOUSLY PUBLISHED NONFICTION ARTICLE/ESSAY/BOOK CHAPTER
1st Place – Alessandra Bianchi, Marblehead, MA – "Open Season: Answering Blackburn's Challenge," Rowing News – "From a strong, descriptive, creative lead paragraph to the last paragraph of this long article, the author writes as if she were in conversation with someone, telling her story. The author inserts details without getting bogged down with too much information. Her word choices are wise and relevant, and flow very well. She puts the reader right in the middle of the Blackburn rowing challenge. Very well done."

2nd Place – Patrick Flanary, New York, NY – "Vinyl Voyagers," Narrative.ly – "The writer gives the reader a fascinating account into the world of record-lovers, and how one man goes to the "ends of the world" for his rare, historic finds. The author is spot on with his descriptive sentences. Just like the other two writers in our top three, he puts the reader smack dab into time and Place. Great job!"

3rd Place – Linda Bragg, New Port Richey, FL – "Deliverance" – "The author tells a deeply personal story without being maudlin. Her writing style is deceptively "simple," yet gets to the heart of the story with her well-chosen words. She makes the reader "feel" her own emotions-a sign of a good writer."

1st HM – Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "The Best Bad Tennis Player of All Time – Andy Roddick," TennisOne

2nd HM – Kathleen Vestal Logan, Gulf Breeze, FL – "History Sows the Seeds for Women's Second Blooming," Chapter 1: Second Blooming for Women

3rd HM – Paul Fein, Agawam, MA – "The 10 Greatest Matches in Wimbledon History," Sports Illustrated

4th HM – Robert B. Robeson, Lincoln, NE – "It Ain't Easy to Love Your Enemy," Military Magazine

5th HM – Mark Hawthorne, Rohnert Park, CA – "The Problem with Palm Oil," VegNews

6th HM – Frederick Jessett, Sammamish, WA – "What Is It With Kids And Sticks?" The Seattle Times


UNPUBLISHED NONFICTION ARTICLE/ESSAY/BOOK CHAPTER
1st Place – Joy Wooderson, O'Fallon, MO – "Diary of a Part-time Dog Lover" – "Whether you're a dog lover or not, the writer expresses a delightful relationship with an "on loan" dog, who happens to be quirky and lovable according to the writer's words. The author takes the reader through her experience succinctly and eloquently. Every well-chosen word/paragraph moves the story forward to a bittersweet end. Very well done."

2nd Place – Kaitlyn Murphy, Council Bluffs, IA – "Behind the Inheritance" – This story came close to the top choice. The author of this essay took hold of beautifully constructed words and phrases to form a poignant story. Because of this, the reader hovers over the grandmother and granddaughter as though he/she is in the same room with them. That's the sign of a good writer.

3rd Place – Rick Lamplugh, Corvallis, OR – "The Bison's Last Ride" – The characters' well-written/logical quotes/words are interspersed very well with the narrative. Copy flows well, whether it's what each character is saying, or what the plot carries forward. No words are unnecessary, so the writer has edited himself/herself very well in this piece.

1st HM – Kim Rogers, Edmond, OK – "The Sunrise"

2nd HM – Camelia Townsend, Ashburn, VA – "Prelude to Change"


POETRY
1st Place – Anna Amatuzio, New York, NY – "With Pleasure," pantoum – Stays true to form and presents a story that has emotional impact and, for many of us, strong reader identification, too. Well-done!

2nd Place - Joan Weiner, Weaverville, NC – "Pasta e Fagioli," free verse – Makes a familiar subject fresh, personable, and visual through the use of strong nouns and verbs. Emotional impact and a solid ending also lift and assist the poem. Loved it!

3rd Place - Kermit Brown, Asheville, NC – "Silent Screams," free verse – Has no spare words as it pictures an abandoned prison camp and artistically honors those who suffered there.

1st HM - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "The Midnight Train," sonnet – Gives readers a scene we can readily see, connect with, and feel the effect.

2nd HM - Joyce Shiver, Crystal River, FL – "Music of the River," sestina – Moves along like the river with details and descriptions observed well – and well said.

3rd HM - Jan Evans, Toccoa, GA – "Finding God," nonet – Has no wordiness to hinder its movement as all nine lines stay true to form from the first 9-syllable line to the last one-syllable ending.

4th HM - Erna Hennessy, San Francisco, CA – "Two Oldies," humor poem – Engages readers with a fresh twist on life in a shoe.

5th HM - George Rhoades, Duncan, OK –  "Old Men At the Coffee Shop," free verse – Observes keenly and moves a familiar scene with rhythmic lines and end-line rhyme.

6th HM - Sally Clark, Fredericksburg, TX – "She Leaves Us, A Little At A Time," free verse – Creates an emotional impact from the first verse (actually, from the title) yet avoids sentimentality.

7th HM - Constance C.F. Golden, Duanesburg, NY – "Aftermath," free verse – Presents an after-the-storm scene that draws readers into the experience and its impact.

 

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